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Friday 8 August 2014

Wolf



The wolf

WALT: describe


Remember to:
  • use looks, actions and characteristics
  • use describing words
  • similes and metaphors
  • paragraphs (from planning sheet)

Never be fooled by a grandma that looks weird it might be the wolf. Behind the wicked smile are sharp knifes ready to dig in to people. As dark as mud there are marks on the nose and his eyes are blue like the sea. His tail is fluffy like foam.

He pretends to be kind as a lamb so he can eat people. He is ready to knock on the door then say’s something mean to the people and eat them up. He is a very good actor, pretending to dress up as grandma so when little red riding hood comes along, he can gobble her up in one bite.

The Wolf is very sneaky, he went inside grandma’s house by changing his voice to be like Little Red Riding Hood. He knocks on the door and say’s “Let me in i’m little red riding hood. He was very greedy because he ate grandma
in bite.

So the next time you see the big bad wolf run away or if you packed a gun use it.

3 comments:

  1. I love how you described the bad wolf because you added similes and metaphors also some describing words

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    1. Hi Suhayra
      Thank you for commenting on by Blog.
      What's your favourite animal?

      From Nateesha

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  2. Kia ora Nateesha,
    Great describing the wolf and perfect spelling. Ilike the picture
    From: Alice :-D

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